https://youtu.be/P84PUOj5x2M
Overall I think this elevator pitch went a lot better. I tried to be more personable and driven, but also clear with my idea. Last time I wasn't as open, didn't talk as clearly and rushed my idea. This time I slowed down, made good executive presence and delivered my idea from beginning to end.
Hello Nick,
ReplyDeleteI think you improved a lot from the last video to this one. Your pitch was easy to follow and it was evident what problem you were trying to solve. The tone of your voice and hand motions used also added to your presentation and made it easy to focus on what you had to say.